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yeloman Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 20 N: 36] (535) [2007-10-15 18:59]

H! I think it's a bit too cropped, we don't even see all the helmet. However, your subject was well exposed, reflections in the helmet are a big plus!

Well done!
MW

yeloman Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 20 N: 36] (535) [2007-10-15 18:56] [+]

Nicely exposed subject, even though the sky is gray (green leafs help in this case!)

Well done!
MW

yeloman Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 20 N: 36] (535) [2007-09-13 8:14] [+]

sorry, bud, but I have no idea what you've done. maybe I am stupid.
Misplaced ingenuity is my guess.

yeloman Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 20 N: 36] (535) [2007-08-28 9:01]

Hello! Your picture has many interesting points. The tones are warm and it gives a good feeling. There are interesting details too, but I think you sould have post a bigger photo... The subject is so interesting, it deserves a bit more.

Thanks for sharing!
MW

yeloman Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 20 N: 36] (535) [2007-07-28 8:11] [+]

Hi! I'm not sure B&W is the best way to present this photograph... Even though this locomotive is old, I think the whole thing would look nicer in colors.

I would have tried to change the point of view, so we wouldn't see the big white (and not so interesting) building as a background.

TFS!
MW

yeloman Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 20 N: 36] (535) [2007-07-28 8:09]

Interesting shapes! The photoshopping on the red box is too obvious though...

You should have tried to make the picture perfectly symetrical, instead of 'almost'.

TFS!
MW

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karn Silver Star Critiquer [C: 26 W: 0 N: 8] (620)

Great

yeloman Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 20 N: 36] (535) [2007-07-28 8:07]

It first looked like a fruit. Nice colors!

I would have erased the little dots (little lights) and the pink one, at the right.

TFS!
MW

yeloman Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 20 N: 36] (535) [2007-05-31 16:25]

There are a few problems with your picture... First, the border, it's kitch and doesn't fit to the subject. I think you should have used a more simple border.

The second problem is your composition. The trees are distracting from the subjet (it would have been OK if at least I could see one complete tree, not only a few leafs..).

It's important to remember that a good subject in your picture doesn't necessarily make the picture grat!

Thanks for sharing anyway! ;)
MW

yeloman Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 20 N: 36] (535) [2007-05-27 10:31]

It remembers me the movie Antz..!

Nicely done! ;)

MW

yeloman Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 20 N: 36] (535) [2007-05-21 15:38] [+]

Very original! Colours are simply beautiful..!

Thanks for sharing, MW