to the water ducks!

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• TallullahLilac (988)
• [2007-05-15 4:58]

I like this shot. The lighting is great, and the little glimpse of pond in the corner, and the colours on the duck in the foreground. Nice shot
TFS
Philippa

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• Royaldevon (16358)
• [2007-05-15 5:21]
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Hello Carme,
This is like the page of a children's story book. I like the capture of the ducks following in procession down to the water. It has lovely imagery! My problem is with half ducks. I think it would have been better if you had removed the ducks at the left and right, then you would have had that magic number of three - perfect for composition!

I have done a little w/s to show what I mean.
Hope you like it.
Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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• NinaM (188)
• [2007-05-15 11:17]

I love this picture too, you're so close to the duck, there is movement and life. Grrreat! I went to see the workshop and very strangely I prefer the version with the half ducks... for the chaotic life of ducks shown in the original version. Colours, DOF, POV, everything is good and childish, yes.
Francine

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• eBirdy (1548)
• [2007-05-20 6:08]

Tremendos colors els que han quedat...I què dir dels ànecs...m'agraden molt! Records, Marta