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Not Mother

Not Mother
Información de la foto
Copyright: Alejandro Rios Ibanez (retori) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 137 W: 0 N: 24] (555)
Género: Gente
Medio: Color
Tomada el: 2005-05-09
Categorías: Vida cotidiana, Arte, Experimental, Abstract, Nocturnal, Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed], Portrait
Versión de la foto: Versión original
Fecha enviada: 2005-05-09 9:17
Vista: 1559
Puntos: 10
[Normas para las notas] Notas del fotógrafo
this one was composed yesterday, and i put that name cus' yesterday was not the Mother's Day, it was just a "comercial celebration" so i wanna be against that (in a respetuous kind of way) but as ussual trying to put my feelings of the moment in to the composition...
here are a several numbers of layers and the "work" was only play with the transparencies, textures, colors and positions, the main phot has a difusse glow.

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1134 W: 420 N: 1093] (6670)
  • [2005-05-09 12:38]

Very artisitic and creative collage here , this is art, like the different layers and portraits, to me it radiates sensuality and dreaming..also the colors used are very well chosen ..wonderfull job !!

Good idea Alejandro, but...
It is very odd that the picture in the background is sharper than the one in front. The angle of the male model is not very flattering, while the other (beautiful) models get all the attention. Do not be satisfied with results to easy, if necessary start allover again.
I agree with your view on the commercialisation of events that are based on a sense of love and gratitude. But isn't that the case with any event nowadays ? (sadly enough :-( )

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  • mwebr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 141 N: 666] (3402)
  • [2005-05-09 14:50]
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Ok I'm going to half smiley chime in here. I really like the colors that are in this montage and the girl is quite pretty and takes more of the focus in the composition. So I agree with WALTERito about the sharper bg and what really draws attention here. I also mirror Walter's and your sentiments "on the commercialisation of events that are based on a sense of love and gratitude. But isn't that the case with any event nowadays ? (sadly enough :-( )" Could not of said it better myself for I would be regurgitating what was just said.


reitero lo que te dije que pienso sobre esta foto... lo que si, aquí pude apreciar bien la textura que le diste, por lo menos en el color rojo sobre tu cabeza... me gusta

I certainly like your experiments with photography . Would it be possible to post a note as to how you did it ? Jim

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  • egerie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 643 W: 135 N: 266] (1968)
  • [2005-05-09 21:18]

Vous avez un style bien particulier et très artistique. De prime abord, je n'aime pas particulièrement ces superposition de calques qui résultent en composition floue mais je dois admettre que vous manipulez très adroitement ce genre d'image et que le résultat est très satisfaisant. Celle-ci est une très jolie création... Nice work Alejandro...
Buenas noches

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