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• manujmehta (11900)
• [2009-08-28 0:49]

hello Tjutjut
how are you doing friend?
nice to see after a long time
interesting expressions yes the ISO has gone and so the apreture and even i am not sure about the crops, but i can understand that you can't bring the same subject in street photography.
hope to see you regular on TL

regards
MAnuj Mehta

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• MLINES (8468)
• [2009-08-28 0:50]

Hi Tjutjut, You are being to tough on yourself, as this portrait has plenty of appeal. The skin tones and sharpness around the eyes seems fine and he seems happy to be in your lens. TFS. Murray.


PS Long time no see- i'll be there mid Nov.

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• mikolaj_cava (29312)
• [2009-08-28 0:53]

Hello Tjutjut! Nice boy, very nice face, excellent eyes. Good lightness. Perfect capture. Original portrait. Well done!

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• Marylou (13230)
• [2009-08-28 2:02]

Hello Tjutjut :)

Happy to see you back !!! Cute boy and nice shot imo. You captured well the innocence of child, great eyes contact.
Hope to see you more here :)
Have a nice day
Marylou ;)

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• shelbeesmom (47802)
• [2009-08-28 6:56]
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It's not too bad Tjutjut! Really! Adorable kid! LOVE those ears and how they are backlit! He has a nice expression, really cool! Lemme see if I can do a WS and jump it further!
B-)
Linda

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• kross1 (4376)
• [2009-08-28 12:06]

Hi Tjutjut,
I have done that so many times. I what really like here is the eye contact. He has beautiful big eyes. The tight crop works for me and as for the other tech stuff...oh well, not much you can do.
Regards,
Kevin

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• rewshearer (20718)
• [2009-08-28 17:00]

Haha these mistakes happen, to me very often indeed. :)

Even so, a "failure" on your part would be a reasonable success on many others' parts, and the colours, light, and the sharpness on his eyes are all quite acceptable.

Not sure about the cropped chin, I don't think it works here.

Rew

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• tanburi (36984)
• [2009-08-29 0:35]

Hello Tjutjut,
Long time no see you and your splendid works...
Its one of them. Good cropping, eye cantact and using of light...
I love all of them.
See you later
TFS
Selahattin E

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• Urfaust (13101)
• [2009-08-29 15:57]

welcome back Tjutjut.. ;))
judging to this capture.. i council to make portraits always in this same way.. ;))
i think portraits are beautiful expecially for expressions and subjects
great intensity in this sight.. and lovely emotions too!
good and effective capture!
thanks
ciao Marco

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• mvdisco (35075)
• [2009-08-29 21:15]

Hi TjutJut,
Nice portrait of this young kid,
good close-up and nice focus,
great naturel colors and light.
very well done.
Michel

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• GreenBaron (48718)
• [2009-08-30 1:35]

Hi Tjutjut,
Good to see you're back! You are being missed on TL as fine photographer. This is a nice portrait the glance in his eyes is perfect. Indeed not the most ideal camera settings, but overall not bad at all.
Looking forward to more of your hand!
Hans

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• atomas59 (2316)
• [2009-08-30 1:52]
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Hi Tjutjut,
Althought I find the image a little "foggy" it does on certain occasion, create quite a nice mood, which I feel about this one.

Superb kid, and wonderfull expression. Very intimated and human. I really like the framing of this shot. Right to the point, where the emotions lays. Genuine good portrait.

I've done a workshop, with a different approach, hope you'll like.

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• Usaf (1462)
• [2009-08-30 17:49]

Hello Bramantoro
Everything is wrong in this shot . . ISO is high, speed is too fast, aperture is too wide . . Why? . . I forget to set to normal . . but the kid was already gone . . can't redo the work . . still u got a superb result.
(IMO) a little space from the bottom, u have crop the chin.

TFS
Usaf

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• harpya (9527)
• [2009-09-01 7:13]

Ciao my friend Tjutjut


How nice to have news from you ...
I'm sure all is well with you!
A beautiful and wonderful portrait of this beautiful child.
Beautiful pair of eyes he has, amazing!
Great composition very well captured.
A splendid picture, lovely sharpness.
Greetings

Sergio

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• gunershot (20096)
• [2009-09-08 8:40]

Hi Tjutjut,
Here is delight of life..
Here is our beautiful life.
Excellent portrait and its excellent details.
Congratulations.tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

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• boomcat (16869)
• [2009-09-09 8:38]

still ok bah bro.. :) no worry.. i thought your son.. walaupun kurang masih boleh diterima.. still cantik.. still menarik.. still terang, etc.. nice work..

regards, terry

Selamat berpuasa yg tidak lama lagi habis.. :)

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• yopiefranz (1290)
• [2009-09-10 23:15]

Halo apa kabar?
Sehat-sehat aja oom?
Walau lupa set ke normal, tapi anda dapat ekspresi lucunya yang memukau. suka dengan cara dia memandang dan senyumnya, so innocent.
salam hangat dari aceh.
yopie

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• prometej (976)
• [2009-09-17 13:53]

Hi Tjutju
nice composition dude
yes the ISO is high
but anyway the photo is good.
Riste

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• kss (137)
• [2009-11-07 19:38]

Hi!
fantastic close-up.very nice & sweet boy.TFS,keya.

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• korbee (13527)
• [2009-11-08 4:20]

Good to see you my friens ,unfortunately we dont see you very much,because a club like TL, desperately needs people like you,I mean positve caracters and good pictures!

Sehat !

jan