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Marcin, first of all welcome to TL. Nice first submission here. It's a cool shot with a nice mood.
I appreciate the creativity in the idea and although this is your first submission I'm going to critique it with some suggestions hopefully you find useful.
This shot would have been much better without the glass or bottle. The real scene is through the blinds. That is where the proper lighting and focus is because it is lacking with the bottle and liquid pouring.
There would have to be more detail and focus on the liquid/bottle to make this work well.
Also if you can make the file larger, use the complete 800 pixel size when you can.
Hope this helps, that's why we use TL is to learn and offer suggestions. looking forward to your next submissions.